Convenience life
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think is the best benefit of digital technology?
I think. maybe, it is convenience, challenge ,
New change and development .
It have developed about our phycical life.
The Present is more light than the past.
We got a lot of convenience through our handphone and internet.
We can meet our family to live far at short time.
Because, transportation developed for short time.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I think. maybe, it is convenience, challenge , New change and development .
>>> I think it probably the convenience, challenge, new change and development.
It have developed about our phycical life.
It have developed about our phycical life.
>>> It has developed our physical life.
The Present is more light than the past.
>>> The present is easier than the past.
We got a lot of convenience through our handphone and internet.
>>> correct
We can meet our family to live far at short time. Because, transportation developed for short time.
We can meet our family to live far at short time. Because, transportation developed for short time.
>>> We can meet our family who live far at a short time because transportation has developed for a short time.
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