\"Conversation is an exercise of the mind; gossip is merely an exercise of the tongue.\" What does t

2025-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I agree. Conversation needs thinking, but gossip is just meaningless. I don’t like gossip, but I sometimes talk about people who hurt me.

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           \"Conversation is an exercise of the mind; gossip is merely an exercise of the tongue.\" 



I agree.
>>> OR: I agree with that point. 

Conversation needs thinking, but gossip is just meaningless.
>>> Meaningful conversation requires thought, but gossip lacks substance.
>>> OR: Engaging in discourse demands reflection, whereas gossip is devoid of purpose.

I don’t like gossip, but I sometimes talk about people who hurt me.
>>> I don\'t enjoy gossiping, but I do sometimes speak about those who\'ve hurt me.
>>> OR:  Though I refrain from gossiping, I do discuss personal experiences involving difficult people.

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