Conversation Skill
학생이 쓴 원문
When you are in conversation with someone, you sometimes cut their stories off if you don\'t intend to that. If you notice someone who are cut their stories off by me feel uncomfortable, then you had better apologize to them.However,In reality, There are thousands of situation not to notify their feelings, So you should carefully participate the conversation not to cut other\'s story off.
강사 첨삭
Hi John,
Focus on the flow of your sentences.
Each sentence has a relation to the previous one.
Don\'t forget that.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When you are in conversation with someone, you sometimes cut their stories off if you don\'t intend to that.
>> When you are in conversation with people, you sometimes cut their stories off even if you don\'t intend to that.
If you notice someone who are cut their stories off by me feel uncomfortable, then you had better apologize to them.
>> If you notice someone whose story you cut off feeling uncomfortable, then you had better apologize to him or her.
However,In reality, There are thousands of situation not to notify their feelings,
>> However, in reality, there are thousands of situations when we don\'t even notice their feelings.
So you should carefully participate the conversation not to cut other\'s story off.
>> That\'s why you should carefully participate in the conversation and don\'t go around cutting people off.
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