Conversation with Piter

2014-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Happy Ester!! My teather~~ I hope that you spend wonderful Ester with you family. I am planing to talk with Piter who is the director in my company .I afarid. I am always asking something I ask you some correction again. Thanks for your great help. It will be a graeat help for me. Because The Singapore Housing corporation is going to give Thyssen-Singapore more Toshiba elevators. I have ability to manage Toshiba lift. And I'd like to work there. So May I ask you to help me work in Singapore. I have my resume written English focused on Toshiba lift. I already sent my resume to Singapore. What I want to you is that please confirm my elevator skill and my l English to Thyssen-Singapore. I afarid. I am always asking something

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [Name]!
Well, do not worry about me checking your compositions because not only that it is my work but I am happy to do it since I am glad that I would be able to help you even in a simple way.

So it\'s my pleasure to help you.
And I would be happier than ever if you would have achieve your dream the soonest.

Always,

Kathrine ^^


Happy Ester!! My teather~~

>>  Happy Easter my teacher!!
 I hope that you spend wonderful Ester with you family.

>>  I hope that you spent a wonderful Easter with your family.
 I am planing to talk with Piter who is the director in my company

>>  I am planning to talk to Peter who is the director of my company.
I afarid. I am always asking something

>>  I\'m afraid that I am always asking you something.
 I ask you some correction again.

>>  I am asking your for some corrections again.

Thanks for your great help.

>>  correct!

It will be a graeat help for me.
>>  correct! (spelling correction-great)
Because The Singapore Housing corporation is going to give Thyssen-Singapore more Toshiba elevators. 

>>  correct!
 I have ability to manage Toshiba lift.

>>  I have the ability to manage the Toshiba lift.

And I\'d like to work there.

>>  correct!

So May I ask you to help me work in Singapore.

>>  correct!

>> or; So may I ask your help for me to work in Singapore?

>> or: So I\'m asking your help for me to be able to work in Singapore.

I have my resume written English focused on Toshiba lift.

>>  I have my resume written in English which is focused on the Toshiba lift.
 I already sent my resume to Singapore.

>>  I already sent my resume in Singapore.

What I want to you is that please confirm my elevator skill and my l English to Thyssen-Singapore.
>>  What I am asking you is to confirm my elevator skills and my English skills to Thyssen-Singapore.
 I afarid. I am always asking something

>>  I\'m afraid that I am always asking something for you.

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