Conversation with Piter
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Hello Mr. [Name]!
Well, do not worry about me checking your compositions because not only that it is my work but I am happy to do it since I am glad that I would be able to help you even in a simple way.
So it\'s my pleasure to help you.
And I would be happier than ever if you would have achieve your dream the soonest.
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Happy Ester!! My teather~~
>> Happy Easter my teacher!!
I hope that you spend wonderful Ester with you family.
>> I hope that you spent a wonderful Easter with your family.
I am planing to talk with Piter who is the director in my company
>> I am planning to talk to Peter who is the director of my company.
I afarid. I am always asking something
>> I\'m afraid that I am always asking you something.
I ask you some correction again.
>> I am asking your for some corrections again.
Thanks for your great help.
>> correct!
It will be a graeat help for me.
>> correct! (spelling correction-great)
Because The Singapore Housing corporation is going to give Thyssen-Singapore more Toshiba elevators.
>> correct!
I have ability to manage Toshiba lift.
>> I have the ability to manage the Toshiba lift.
And I\'d like to work there.
>> correct!
So May I ask you to help me work in Singapore.
>> correct!
>> or; So may I ask your help for me to work in Singapore?
>> or: So I\'m asking your help for me to be able to work in Singapore.
I have my resume written English focused on Toshiba lift.
>> I have my resume written in English which is focused on the Toshiba lift.
I already sent my resume to Singapore.
>> I already sent my resume in Singapore.
What I want to you is that please confirm my elevator skill and my l English to Thyssen-Singapore.
>> What I am asking you is to confirm my elevator skills and my English skills to Thyssen-Singapore.
I afarid. I am always asking something
>> I\'m afraid that I am always asking something for you.
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