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There's not many cook that I know how to make.
I know how to make a gimbop.
The gimbop is food that almost of korean can make.
These staff are laver, boiled rice, pickled daikon in vineger, egg fried, ham.
and something i want more staffs.
how to------
First, put and flat boiled rice on the laver.
Second, on this, put little daikon, fried egg, and ham.
Last, roll this by the laver of bottom.
so simple and nutrition fulled food complete.
My favorit food is a red bean shabet.
this food is cool, but I often come up this shabet.
My mother have maken the cook everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan!
Thank you for making your homework. Please continue doing it. It's good that you know how to cook or make gimbop. I felt hungry reading your composition. Haha! Well, great job with the homework! See you in class.
T.Faye
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There\'s not many cook that I know how to make.
>>There is not many that I know how to cook.I know how to make a gimbop.
>>Correct!The gimbop is food that almost of korean can make.
>>Almost all of the Koreans know how to make gimbop.These staff are laver, boiled rice, pickled daikon in vineger, egg fried, ham. and something i want more staffs.
>> It's made of laver, boiled rice, pickled daikon in vinegar, fried egg, ham and more.how to------
>>Correct!
>>How to make it:First, put and flat boiled rice on the laver.
>>Correct!Second, on this, put little daikon, fried egg, and ham.
>>Correct!Last, roll this by the laver of bottom.
>>Last, roll this using the laver.so simple and nutrition fulled food complete.>>It is so simple and it's a nutritious complete food.My favorit food is a red bean shabet.
>>My favorite food is red bean shabet.this food is cool, but I often come up this shabet.
>>This food is cold, I often come up with my own shabet.My mother have maken the cook everyday.
>>My mother cooks at home everyday.
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