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My aunt bought a cookie to me.It is Danish Royalty Cookies.It is really fantastic.But a little expensive.Let's share cookies with dried mangoes together.
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Hi, [이름]!
You just made me hungry.
I love cookies especially chocolate cookies.
Okay let\'s share or exchange cookies and dried mangoes.
Have a good night! See you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
My aunt bought a cookie to me.
>> My aunt bought a cookie for me.
It is Danish Royalty Cookies.
>> correct
It is really fantastic.But a little expensive.
>> It is really fantastic, but a little expensive.
Let\'s share cookies with dried mangoes together.
>> Let\'s share cookies and dried mangoes together.
>> or: Let\'s exchange cookies with dried mangoes together.
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