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2020-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Hi Gabby~ I don\'t love cooking but I am a mother and housewife. I think a basic duty of housewife. I can\'t well cooking but I have to cooking. I am hard to cooking in the kitchen room over 1 hour. My legs get sick. Anyway I am busy because I have to do cooking and study English these days. Last Saterday, I went dentist because I check up my teeth. I got my haircut today. I was delay things because I am afraid of corona virus. It begans summer here and a lot of hot. We are more hard in summer hot. Did you have a good day? Good tonight. See you tomorrow. Gabby!

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Great job! Keep learning everday.

- T. Gabby :)

Hi Gabby~

>> Correct.
I don\'t love cooking but I am a mother and housewife.

>> I don\'t love cooking but I have to because I am a mother and a housewife.
I think a basic duty of housewife.

>> That\'s a basic duty of being a housewife.
I can\'t well cooking but I have to cooking.

>> I can\'t cook well but I have to cook.
I am hard to cooking in the kitchen room over 1 hour. My legs get sick.

>> My legs get painful when I cook in the kitchen for more than an hour.
Anyway I am busy because I have to do cooking and study English these days.
>> Anyway, I am more busy these days because I have to cook and study English.
Last Saterday, I went dentist because I check up my teeth.\\

>> Last Saturday, I went to dentist to have my teeth checked.
I got my haircut today.

>> Correct.
I was delay things because I am afraid of corona virus.

>> I delayed it because I was afraid of corona virus.
It begans summer here and a lot of hot.

>> It\'s summer here now and really hotter now.
We are more hard in summer hot.

>> It\'s harder in summer.
Did you have a good day?

>> Correct.
Good tonight.

>> Good night.
See you tomorrow. Gabby!

>> Correct.

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