Coping with a cold
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As the teacher wrote in the previous review, the winter is getting closer. So we have to care about our health not to get cold. If you already had a cold, then the best way to get rid of it is to have a rest time with pills. It\'s a quite simple way but not easy to follow if you have a job. even though you could have a half-day, your mind might feel uncomfortable because other people might be able to think I am weak and I used a half-day just to enjoy my time. No matter what others think about you, you should take a rest when you are sick.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
You said it so well.
These are things that people are already familiar with.
However, your thoughts are so organized so it\'s like reading a new idea for the first time.
You did really well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
As the teacher wrote in the previous review, the winter is getting closer.
>> As the teacher wrote in the previous review, winter is getting closer.
So we have to care about our health not to get cold.
>> So we have to take care of our health so as not to get cold.
If you already had a cold, then the best way to get rid of it is to have a rest time with pills.
>> If you already have a cold, then the best way to get rid of it is to take a rest and medicine.
It\'s a quite simple way but not easy to follow if you have a job.
>> Correct
even though you could have a half-day, your mind might feel uncomfortable because other people might be able to think I am weak and I used a half-day just to enjoy my time.
>> Even though you could take a half-day, you might feel uncomfortable because other people might think that you are weak or you might just need an excuse to have a good time.
No matter what others think about you, you should take a rest when you are sick.
>> Correct
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