Corona -19

2020-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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corona-19 started at the begging of this year from china. They had been moving to another countries. Our contry also happened the patients. It is important how we try to find out this happened,but i think that what is gonna happen future is important too. Medicine companies of lots contries try to make a new vaccine everyday. If all of them fail to make it,we can\'t back to our daily life like ago. But if they can,we are able to be back ago. I hope that we are gonna be able to be that. Be careful from covid-19. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)

-T. Gabby :)

corona-19 started at the begging of this year from china.

>> Corona-19 started at the beginning of this year in China.
They had been moving to another countries.

>> It has been transferred to other countries.
Our contry also happened the patients.

>> Our country was also infected.
It is important how we try to find out this happened,but i think that what is gonna happen future is important too.

>> It is important that we try to find out it\'s cause, but I think that what is gonna happen future is important too.
Medicine companies of lots contries try to make a new vaccine everyday.

>> Companies from different countries make vaccines every day.
If all of them fail to make it,we can\'t back to our daily life like ago.

>> If they fail to make it, we can\'t back to our normal life.
But if they can,we are able to be back ago.

>> But if they can,we can come back.
I hope that we are gonna be able to be that.

>> Correct.
Be careful from covid-19.

>> Correct.
Thank you.

>> Correct.

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