Corona virus

This bitter pendemic is far from over. It was just less than a month ago that people were optimistic on the pendemic. It was showen with plunged rates in stock market especially in Nasdaq. Including france, some countries droped the lockdown and even some allowed school to reopen, though at present people are scared about new wave of the virus. This resulted rapid plummet in stock market. Furthermore people are insisting on closing schools pagain. We should wait for a long time for vaccines. People are sick and tired of self quarantine and more and more people are starting getting out of their house behind scientists advisory, staying at home.

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Corona virus

This bitter pandemic is far from over.

CORRECT!

or>>This harsh pandemic is still a long way from being over.

It was just less than a month ago that people were optimistic on the pandemic.

CORRECT!

or>>Just barely a month ago, people were a bit positive on the pandemic.

It was showen with plunged rates in stock market especially in Nasdaq.

>>It showed the stock market with plunging rates especially the Nasdaq.

Including france, some countries droped the lockdown and even some allowed school to reopen, though at present people are scared about new wave of the virus.

>>Including France, some countries dropped the lockdown and even some allowed schools to reopen, although, at present people are scared about the new wave regarding this virus.

This resulted rapid plummet in stock market.

>>This resulted into the rapid plummeting of the stock market.

Furthermore people are insisting on closing schools pagain.

>>Furthermore, people are insisting on closing the schools again.

We should wait for a long time for vaccines.

>>We might have to wait for a long time for the vaccines.

People are sick and tired of self quarantine and more and more people are starting getting out of their house behind scientists advisory, staying at home.

>>People are sick and tired of self-quarantine and more and more people are starting to get out of their houses amidst scientists’ advisory to stay at home.