Coronavirus throughout all industry
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Cronavirus infect industry as well as people.
>>Coronavirus infected industries as well as people.
Car industry of Korea has seriously negative influence of coronavirus.
>>CORRECT!
Many car companies rely on China factory producing components of Car.
>>Many car companies rely in China factory producing components of car.
However, the factory has been paralyzed by corona and it\'s impossible to meet their deadline of production.
>>CORRECT!
Retail industry of Korea has also been revealed on hazard of coronavirus.
>>CORRECT!
Yesterday, GS Home Shopping, which is the biggest broadcasting company related to shopping in Korea, announced that they will stop their businees and disinfect all buildings of their headquater for 4 days as one of the employee was infected by coronavirus.
>> Yesterday, GS Home Shopping, which is the biggest broadcasting company related to shopping in Korea, announced that they will stop their business and disinfect all buildings of their head quarter for 4 days as one of the employee was infected by coronavirus.
I think corona threat of economy as well as our health.
>>I think corona threat economy as well as our health.
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