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2012-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hello, liza. Today is very cold. Today morning, during I took my baby at a nursery, I felt cold. And the ground was heaped up the snow. Korea looked like white. How do you your country, hot or cool ? Take care of your body.^^ 1.The plane flies (above) the clouds. 2.I helped her going (against) the wishes (of) my loved ones. 3. The profit was shared (among) the shareholders. 4. (After) lunch, I shall complete the remaining task. 5. The land is (at) war (with) its neighbor

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!! Good job on answering the questions right. Just keep it up!!! I know that it\'s freezing cold in Korea nowadays. Just take care of yourself. I hope that you\'ll not get sick because of the weather. T.Liza   Hello, liza. >> Hello Liza.Today is very cold. >> Correct Today morning, during I took my baby at a nursery, I felt cold. >> This morning, while I\'m taking my baby to her school, I felt really cold. And the ground was heaped up the snow. >> And the ground was heaped up with snow. Korea looked like white. How do you your country, hot or cool ? >>  Korea looked white. How about the climate in your country. Is it warm or cold?Take care of your body.^^ >> Correct1.The plane flies (above) the clouds. >> Correct2.I helped her going (against) the wishes (of) my loved ones. >> Correct3. The profit was shared (among) the shareholders. >> Correct4. (After) lunch, I shall complete the remaining task. >> Correct5. The land is (at) war (with) its neighbor >> Correct

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