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My hometown is countryside from Cheonan.
That name is Byeongcheon.
There have many farms and very silent and peaceful.
specially, There famous \'Sundae\'.
So, There in spite of countryside the people of the whole region come to here every weekend.
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My hometown is countryside from Cheonan. That name is Byeongcheon.
>>> My hometown is the countryside of Cheonan that is exactly in Byeongcheon.
There have many farms and very silent and peaceful.
>>> There are many farms in the area, it is very silent and peaceful.
specially, There famous \'Sundae\'.
>>> Especially, it is very famous for it\'s \'sundae\'.
So, There in spite of countryside the people of the whole region come to here every weekend.
>>> So, in spite of it being a countryside, people from the whole region come here every weekend to eat a sundae.
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