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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Ma'am.
Did you have a nice day?
I hope so.
I knew that you are hard for teaching me.
You was passionate. but My attitude was short.
I was sorry.
Because of you, I was encouraged during your class.
Thank you.
Now, There are five times class.
I will try hard for never missing one day.
See you tomorrow.
1. signature
When I thought for making my signature is fourteen years old.
I made it, connect all my name spellings so it is very difficult.
In these days, because I use every case of using credit card, I use it made simple shape.
2. autograph
I have don't anybody's autograph.
3. broken
When I was in college, I had a photograph class.
My camera was manual.
While I had homework for taking the seoul scape, my camera was broken.
So I suffered much.
4. estimate
Every years, the desert increases ten million ha is like the South Korea.
5. musician
Korean young musician is famous of the world.
examples 2NE1, Big bang, Wonder girls etc.
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan,
I am having a nice day. IT started cold but now it is becoming warmer and I think that my day is going to be good. Thank you for asking.
Thank you for doing your homework. I am impressed you did a great job. I appreciate that you made complete sentences and that some of them are correct! I am happy because I know that oyu are improving. Keep it up! See you tomrrow!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
Hi! Ma\'am.Did you have a nice day?
>>Correct!I hope so.>>Correct!
I knew that you are hard for teaching me.>>I know that you have a hard time teaching me.
You was passionate. but My attitude was short.
>>You are passionate and my attitude is short.I was sorry.
>>I am sorry.Because of you, I was encouraged during your class.
>>You encouraged me to come to class everytime.Thank you.
>>Correct!Now, There are five times class.
>>Now, we have to meet five times.I will try hard for never missing one day.
>>I will try hard not to miss one day of class.See you tomorrow.>>Correct!1. signatureWhen I thought for making my signature is fourteen years old.
>>I thought of making signatures when I was fourteen years old.I made it, connect all my name spellings so it is very difficult.
>>I connected my names together and it was so difficult.In these days, because I use every case of using credit card, I use it made simple shape.>>These days, I am using a credit card so I made my signaturre simple so that it is easier to sign.2. autographI have don\'t anybody\'s autograph.>>I don't have anybody's autograph.3. brokenWhen I was in college, I had a photograph class.>>Correct!
My camera was manual.>>Correct!
While I had homework for taking the seoul scape, my camera was broken.>>When I had a homework to take pictures of the Seoul scape, my camera was broken.
So I suffered much.>>Correct!4. estimateEvery years, the desert increases ten million ha is like the South Korea.>>Every year, the desert increases ten million hectares like South Korea.5. musicianKorean young musician is famous of the world.
>>Youn Korean musicians are famous all over the world.examples 2NE1, Big bang, Wonder girls etc.
>>Like for example, 2NE1, Big Bang, Wonder Girls, Etc.
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