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2012-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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I think that we must autonomously. Because general student age is minimum twenty. Twenty age have a freedom and responsibility that something. If student have an autonomously behavior, they must have to respinsibility that behavior. So I think that we must atonomously. ^^!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Chloe.I agree to what you said. We have the freedom to do anything but we have to be responsible for the consequences of our actions. Keep going, Chloe!Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:I think that we must autonomously.>>I think that we muct be independent.Because general student age is minimum twenty.>>Becasue most students\' age is around twenty.Twenty age have a freedom and responsibility that something.>>In the age of twenty, we have the freedom amd responsibility to do something.If student have an autonomously behavior, they must have to respinsibility that behavior.>>If students are independent, they must also be responsible.So I think that we must atonomously.>>So I think that we must de independent.

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