영어첨삭교정
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I like the most. To tell the story, Sa Jeong-ok is married to Yu han-rim. However, as there are no children, Yu han-rim soon adopts Gyo as her concubine to succeed her. However, because Kyo came in as the wife of rich man Yuhan-rim and came in to satisfy her own greed, she put Sa Jeong-ok into various conspiracies and makes Yuhan-rim himself drive her Sassi. The plot of this novel is to unravel the fate of the Sa Jeong-ok and the stories of Yu Han-rim and Kyo. The title of is an abbreviation for the words Sassi goes on a long trip to the south, and it is a representative classic Korean novel. If you read this book, Kyo\'s unimaginable deeds (she even killed his own son to drive out Sassi) will be most memorable.
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Hello there, Maria! ^_^
You said this was a novel, right? Was it based on true events?
I actually asked you to talk about a real historical figures and his/her contributions to Korea.
Nonetheless, I had fun reading your composition.
I will see you again on Monday. Have a good and safe weekend!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
I like the most.
>>> I this story the most.
To tell the story, Sa Jeong-ok is married to Yu han-rim.
>>> It\'s about Sa Jeong-ok who\'s married to Yu Han-rim.
However, as there are no children, Yu han-rim soon adopts Kyo as her concubine to succeed her.
>>> They had no children, thus, Yu Han-rim took Gyo as his concubine to have a successor.
However, because Kyo came in as the wife of rich man Yuhan-rim and came in to satisfy her own greed, she put Sa Jeong-ok into various conspiracies and makes Yuhan-rim himself drive her Sassi.
>>> However, Kyo, who came as the wife of the rich man, Yu Han-rim, satisfied her greed by framing Sa Jeong-ok into various conspiracies leading Yu Han-rim to drive Sassi away.
The plot of this novel is to unravel the fate of the Sa Jeong-ok and the stories of Yu Han-rim and Kyo.
>>> CORRECT
The title of is an abbreviation for the words Sassi goes on a long trip to the south, and it is a representative classic Korean novel.
>>> The title of this story is the abbreviation of the sentence \'Sassi goes on a long trip to the south,\' and it is a representative of classic Korean novel.
If you read this book, Kyo\'s unimaginable deeds (she even killed his own son to drive out Sassi) will be most memorable.
>>> If you\'d read this book, you\'d astounded by all the unimaginable deed of Kyo. She even killed her own son to drive Sassi away.
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