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학생이 쓴 원문
ㅠ_ㅠ I\'m sad......
Today is 11/24.
Today I lost my smartphone on the way home from school. I was finding hard... but I didn\'t find that....
I\'m sad now. But we called the news agency and We found my smart phone\'s location information! We will find tomorrow...
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Today I lost my smartphone on the way home from school.
>>Today I lost my smartphone on my way home from school.
I was finding hard... but I didn\'t find that
>>I tried finding it, but I can\'t find it.
But we called the news agency and We found my smart phone\'s location information! We will find tomorrow.
>>>But we called the news agency and we found my smart phone\'s location information! We will find it tomorrow.
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