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학생이 쓴 원문
I use Netflix.
After the SAT, My interest in movies and dramas increased.
Meanwhile, I came across a Netflix movie on my friend\'s phone.
Netflix movies were so fun to me.
So I paid for Netflix with my boyfriend.
강사 첨삭
Hi again [이름] [이름]!
I am gonna watch a lot of movies this holiday!
Have a blast!
I use Netflix.
>>> CORRECT!
After the SAT, My interest in movies and dramas increased.
>>> After my SAT, my interest in movies and dramas increased.
Meanwhile, I came across a Netflix movie on my friend\'s phone.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: Then, I happened to watch a Netflix movie on my friend\'s cell phone.
Netflix movies were so fun to me.
>>> Netflix movies are so fun to me.
So I paid for Netflix with my boyfriend.
>>> So I and my boyfriend signed up for Netflix.
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