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학생이 쓴 원문
1. I usually watch movies or dramas on Netflix.
2. When I have an appointment with my friends, I hang out with my friends
3. I order food that I wanted to eat for dinner.
4. I take a walk with my family in the [이름].
5. Finally !! I I lie down and take a rest.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름] [이름]!
See you later!
1. I usually watch movies or dramas on Netflix.
>>> CORRECT!
2. When I have an appointment with my friends, I hang out with my friends.
>>> I hang out with my friends.
3. I order food that I wanted to eat for dinner.
>>> CORRECT!
4. I take a walk with my family in the [이름].
>>> CORRECT!
5. Finally !! I I lie down and take a rest.
>>> Finally, I can lie down and rest.
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