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학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I\'ve never bought a ticket before.
But when I was in the 3rd grade of middle school, an idol( IKON )came to a nearby [이름] because of chicken&beer party !
So my friend and I went to the [이름] early in the morning and saw them in front of us.
I was so excited and enjoyed it !
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름] [이름]!
You must be so lucky to have seen an Idol!
I hope to see Hyun Bin in person someday :)
Actually, I\'ve never bought a ticket before.
>>> CORRECT!
But when I was in the 3rd grade of middle school, an idol( IKON )came to a nearby [이름] because of chicken & beer party!
>>> CORRECT!
So my friend and I went to the [이름] early in the morning and saw them in front of us.
>>> CORRECT!
I was so excited and enjoyed it!
>>> CORRECT!
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