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Hello Ariel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The good choice I made is deciding to raise a dog. Because I feel happy raising my dog. 

>> The good choice I made is deciding to raise a dog because I feel happy raising my dog. 

I didn\'t like to take a picture when I was young and that is the bad choice I made.

>> I didn\'t like taking pictures when I was young and that is a bad choice I made.