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학생이 쓴 원문
some Alcohol make me weird. And two cups of coffee make stomach uncomfortable.
Also very spice food like 불닭볶음면 makes stomach hurt. But I love it.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Kevin!
I appreciate your diligence and the effort to express yourself in writing. Please look at the revision I did, especially when you are writing, and when to use proper capitalization and punctuation marks. Have a happy learning!
See you!
Aki~
some Alcohol make me weird. And two cups of coffee make stomach uncomfortable.
>>> Some alcohol makes me weird. And two cups of coffee make my stomach uncomfortable.
Also very spice food like 불닭볶음면 makes stomach hurt. But I love it.
>>> Also, very spicy food Buldak-stir fried noodles makes my stomach hurt, but I love it.
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