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My favorite restaurant is western restaurant and pretty well known for its pasta in the neighborhood. The reason why the menu is given the support and love from many people including me is that its noodle is made by chef not machine. Thanks to this, the texture of the menu is so good and it seems that this increases the quality of the menu as well. Whenever I have a good news, I have a pasta with my family or sometimes my friends. Therefore, the restaurant always reminds me of all the good memories. :))
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I am glad that you make wonderful memories with foods and places, Liz! May you continue to celebrate small wins!-Faith-
My favorite restaurant is western restaurant and pretty well known for its pasta in the neighborhood. >> My favorite restaurant is a western restaurant, and it is pretty well known for its pasta in the neighborhood.
The reason why the menu is given the support and love from many people including me is that its noodle is made by chef not machine.
>> The reason why the menu is given support and love from many people including me is that its noodle is made by a chef not by a machine.
Thanks to this, the texture of the menu is so good and it seems that this increases the quality of the menu as well.
>> CORRECT
OR Due to this, the texture of the menu is significantly enhanced, thus increasing its quality.
Whenever I have a good news, I have a pasta with my family or sometimes my friends.
>> Whenever I have good news, I share pasta with my family or sometimes with my friends.
Therefore, the restaurant always reminds me of all the good memories. :))
>> CORRECT
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