^ * ^
학생이 쓴 원문
Lei. ~ Good moring.
it's a amazing may. i am trying to thank for everything. this month's my avidness is positive. like a shine sun, i hope to have a bright face. ^ ^ anyways, how about your last weekend?
i am worrying for doing nothing for exam. but that's ok. It is no use crying over spilled milk. On the other hands i could enjoy last weekend well. i satisfied with it.
as i told you last week, i went to my coworkers' wedding ceremony. it has been a pretty clear day in a long time. i made a appointment with my friend to meet at 12pm. but i couldn't finish outfit until 12pm. so i had to take a bus to the wedding. it takes double time. i regreted for my lazyness ㅠ ㅠ. after wedding, i went to meet my friend.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Monday!! Well it’s nice to know that you enjoyed your weekend. I am excited to hear your voice and to talk to you about what happened last weekend. Anyways, see you later.
Lei J
Lei. ~ Good moring.>>correct
it's a amazing may.
>>It’s an amazing may
i am trying to thank for everything.
>>I am trying to thank you for everything
this month my avidness is positive.
>>correct
>>my avidness this month is positive
like a shiny sun, i hope to have a bright face.
>>correct
^ ^ anyways, how about your last weekend? >>correct
i am worrying for doing nothing for exam.
>>I am worried for doing nothing to prepare for my exam
but that's ok.
>>correct
It is no use crying over spilled milk.
>>correct
On the other hands i could enjoy last weekend well.
>>on the other hand, I enjoyed my weekend
i satisfied with it. >>I am satisfied with it
as i told you last week, i went to my coworkers' wedding ceremony.
>>correct
it has been a pretty clear day in a long time.
>>correct
i made a appointment with my friend to meet at 12pm.
>>I made an appointment with my friend at 12 noon
but i couldn't finish outfit until 12pm.
>>but I was not able to change my outfit at 12
so i had to take a bus to the wedding.
>>correct
it takes double time.
>>it took twice the length of time
i regretted for my lazyness ㅠ ㅠ.
>>I regretted because of my laziness
after wedding, i went to meet my friend.>>after the wedding, I went to meet my friend
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