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2010-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Lei. ~ Good moring. it's a amazing may. i am trying to thank for everything. this month's my avidness is positive. like a shine sun, i hope to have a bright face. ^ ^ anyways, how about your last weekend? i am worrying for doing nothing for exam. but that's ok. It is no use crying over spilled milk. On the other hands i could enjoy last weekend well. i satisfied with it. as i told you last week, i went to my coworkers' wedding ceremony. it has been a pretty clear day in a long time. i made a appointment with my friend to meet at 12pm. but i couldn't finish outfit until 12pm. so i had to take a bus to the wedding. it takes double time. i regreted for my lazyness ㅠ ㅠ. after wedding, i went to meet my friend.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Happy Monday!! Well it’s nice to know that you enjoyed your weekend. I am excited to hear your voice and to talk to you about what happened last weekend. Anyways, see you later. Lei J   Lei. ~ Good moring.>>correct it's a amazing may. >>It’s an amazing may i am trying to thank for everything. >>I am trying to thank you for everything this month my avidness is positive. >>correct >>my avidness this month is positive like a shiny sun, i hope to have a bright face. >>correct ^ ^ anyways, how about your last weekend? >>correct i am worrying for doing nothing for exam. >>I am worried for doing nothing to prepare for my exam but that's ok. >>correct It is no use crying over spilled milk. >>correct On the other hands i could enjoy last weekend well. >>on the other hand, I enjoyed my weekend i satisfied with it. >>I am satisfied with it as i told you last week, i went to my coworkers' wedding ceremony. >>correct it has been a pretty clear day in a long time. >>correct i made a appointment with my friend to meet at 12pm. >>I made an appointment with my friend at 12 noon but i couldn't finish outfit until 12pm. >>but I was not able to change my outfit at 12 so i had to take a bus to the wedding. >>correct it takes double time. >>it took twice the length of time i regretted for my lazyness ㅠ ㅠ. >>I regretted because of my laziness after wedding, i went to meet my friend.>>after the wedding, I went to meet my friend

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