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2010-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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but because i took a bus, i was late for the meeting in about an hour. i didn't know that they don't have lots of direct service. so i had to take a going slow line. ㅠ ㅠ even if i was late for the meeting. my freinds greeted me. we had a dinner together. and we drunk. and also we went to singing room. it's enough to release my stress. on last sunday. i went to church with my friend. i prepared lunch box. the menu was kimbob.! after church. we went to park and had a picnic. and also we saw a movie which title is iron 2. during the movie, i didn't know the time passed. it was very intersting. and after dinner, i went to walk with my another friend for digeting.

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but because i took a bus, i was late for the meeting in about an hour. >>correct i didn't know that they don't have lots of direct service. >>correct so i had to take a going slow line. ㅠ ㅠ>>So I have to take the slow line even if i was late for the meeting. >>correct my friends greeted me. >>correct we had a dinner together. >>we had dinner together and we drunk. >>correct and also we went to singing room. >>and also, we went to the singing room it's enough to release my stress. >>correct on last sunday. i went to church with my friend. >>last Sunday, I went to church with my friend. i prepared lunch box. >>I prepared a lunch box the menu was kimbob.! >>correct after church. we went to park and had a picnic. >>correct and also we saw a movie which title is iron 2. >>correct during the movie, i didn't know the time passed. >>correct it was very intersting. >>correct and after dinner, i went to walk with my another friend for digesting. >>after dinner, I had a walk with my other friend.

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