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but because i took a bus, i was late for the meeting in about an hour. i didn't know that they don't have lots of direct service. so i had to take a going slow line. ㅠ ㅠ
even if i was late for the meeting. my freinds greeted me. we had a dinner together. and we drunk. and also we went to singing room. it's enough to release my stress.
on last sunday. i went to church with my friend. i prepared lunch box. the menu was kimbob.! after church. we went to park and had a picnic. and also we saw a movie which title is iron 2. during the movie, i didn't know the time passed. it was very intersting.
and after dinner, i went to walk with my another friend for digeting.
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but because i took a bus, i was late for the meeting in about an hour.
>>correct
i didn't know that they don't have lots of direct service.
>>correct
so i had to take a going slow line. ㅠ ㅠ>>So I have to take the slow line
even if i was late for the meeting.
>>correct
my friends greeted me.
>>correct
we had a dinner together.
>>we had dinner together
and we drunk.
>>correct
and also we went to singing room.
>>and also, we went to the singing room
it's enough to release my stress. >>correct
on last sunday. i went to church with my friend.
>>last Sunday, I went to church with my friend.
i prepared lunch box.
>>I prepared a lunch box
the menu was kimbob.!
>>correct
after church. we went to park and had a picnic.
>>correct
and also we saw a movie which title is iron 2.
>>correct
during the movie, i didn't know the time passed.
>>correct
it was very intersting. >>correct
and after dinner, i went to walk with my another friend for digesting.
>>after dinner, I had a walk with my other friend.
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