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I thought deeply about this \'cause I had some trouble with my old friend lately.
First, when we want to know someone is good or not, I think we should meet them when they are not in good mood. I believe \'good friends\' don\'t use their bad feelings to attack other people. Instead, they ask some help or leave themselves alone for a while. They\'re not acting like a child, who is not good at dealing with emotions.
But I also know people can\'t be always perfect, so sometimes they may do that by overcoming with their anger. Then, if they apologize and promise don\'t do that again, it\'s okay. I can forgive them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sydney! ^^
First, when we want to know someone is good or not, I think we should meet them when they are not in good mood.
But I also know people can\'t be always perfect, so sometimes they may do that by overcoming with their anger.
I can define a good friend as someone who will not betray you.
Friends will always have your back but would not tolerate your wrongdoings.
Andrea
I thought deeply about this \'cause I had some trouble with my old friend lately.
>> Correct
First, when we want to know someone is good or not, I think we should meet them when they are not in good mood.
>> First, when we want to know if someone is good or not, I think we should meet them when they are not in a good mood.
I believe \'good friends\' don\'t use their bad feelings to attack other people.
>> Correct
Instead, they ask some help or leave themselves alone for a while.
>> Instead, they would ask for help or leave for a while to have an alone time for themselves.
They\'re not acting like a child, who is not good at dealing with emotions.
>> They are not immature people who cannot deal with emotions.
But I also know people can\'t be always perfect, so sometimes they may do that by overcoming with their anger.
>> But I also know people can\'t always be perfect, so sometimes they do things to help them overcome their anger.
Then, if they apologize and promise don\'t do that again, it\'s okay. I can forgive them.
>> Then if they apologize and promise not to do that again, I can forgive them.
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