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I like almost all fruits, and of course include cherries. But I don\'t buy them often because their seeds are too big, and it makes me difficult to eat them. Moreover, after eat them, my hands remain dyed red. I don\'t like it.
Thus, I prefer other fruits like blueberries or mangos.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sydney! ^^
Thus, I prefer other fruits like blueberries or mangos.
I like fresh cherries but not canned cherries.
We don\'t grow cherries in the Philippines, therefore it is not common in our country.
I only tried fresh cherries once.
It really tasted sweet.
I wish we could have more cherries rather than the canned ones.
Andrea
I like almost all fruits, and of course include cherries.
>> I like almost all fruits, and of course this include cherries.
But I don\'t buy them often because their seeds are too big, and it makes me difficult to eat them.
>> But I don\'t buy them often because their seeds are too big which makes it difficult to eat.
Moreover, after eat them, my hands remain dyed red. I don\'t like it.
>> Moreover, after eating them, my hands will be dyed red and I don\'t like it.
Thus, I prefer other fruits like blueberries or mangos.
>> Thus, I prefer other fruits like blueberries or mangoes.
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