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I like R&B music and I enjoy listening to park jung hyun who is korean singer these days. she and her songs are so cool. I like her soft and clear voices. Among her songs, my favorite is [ To DREAM]. I never gey sick and tired of hearing it, no matter how many times I listen to it. I heard that her new album will come out soon. I am really looking forward to listening to her new songs. She gratuated from columbia university. So when she sing a pop song her voice is sweet. I like it.

Hi Miss [이름]! Oh that's nice. Sometimes listening to our favorite song or singer can help us feel better. It is a good stress reliever ^^ Let's talk more about that in our class. See you later!   I like R&B music and I enjoy listening to park jung hyun who is korean singer these days.>> I like R&B music and I enjoy listening to park Jung hyun who is a famous Korean singer these days.she and her songs are so cool. >correctI like her soft and clear voices. >> I like her soft and clear voice.Among her songs, my favorite is [ To DREAM].>>correctI never get sick and tired of hearing it, no matter how many times I listen to it. >>correctI heard that her new album will come out soon. >>correctI am really looking forward to listening to her new songs.>>correctShe gratuated from columbia university. >> She graduated from Columbia University.So when she sing a pop song her voice is sweet. >> So when she sings a pop song, her voice is sweet.I like it. >>correct