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학생이 쓴 원문
The weirdest food combination that I experienced is Hawaiian pizza a mix of pineapple and pizza. This has been controversial food ever since it appeared, and I\'m the one who strongly hates it. I first tried it when I was young, being tricked pineapple as cheese because of their quite similar yellow color. In my mouth, I could feel that sweetness of pineapple and clean taste of cheese were completely separated. People who are fond to Hawaiian pizza says that those two different taste existing in one food is what makes it attractive and their harmony is just the thing but unfortunately I guess my tongue can\'t understand it. Since then I haven\'t eaten Hawaiian pizza anymore. I believe I would have never tried it if I knew it was a pineapple at the first time.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! That\'s a funny story! It’s amazing how such a small mix-up, like mistaking pineapple for cheese, can completely change your perception of a food. Hawaiian pizza is definitely one of those foods that has a very strong divide between people who love it and people who just can’t get on board with the combo.
-T. Sonny
The weirdest food combination that I experienced is Hawaiian pizza a mix of pineapple and pizza.
>>The weirdest food combination I’ve ever experienced is Hawaiian pizza, a mix of pineapple and pizza.
This has been controversial food ever since it appeared, and I\'m the one who strongly hates it.
>>This food has been controversial ever since it appeared, and I’m one of those who strongly dislike it.
I first tried it when I was young, being tricked pineapple as cheese because of their quite similar yellow color.
>>I first tried it when I was young, having been tricked into thinking the pineapple was cheese because of their similar yellow color.
In my mouth, I could feel that sweetness of pineapple and clean taste of cheese were completely separated.
>>In my mouth, I could feel that the sweetness of the pineapple and the clean taste of the cheese were completely separate.
People who are fond to Hawaiian pizza says that those two different taste existing in one food is what makes it attractive and their harmony is just the thing but unfortunately I guess my tongue can\'t understand it.
>>People who enjoy Hawaiian pizza say that the two different tastes existing in one dish is what makes it attractive, and their harmony is what draws people in.
Since then I haven\'t eaten Hawaiian pizza anymore.
>>Since then, I haven’t eaten Hawaiian pizza again.
I believe I would have never tried it if I knew it was a pineapple at the first time.
>>I believe I would have never tried it if I had known it was pineapple the first time.
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