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학생이 쓴 원문
As I remember, the best advice that I received is to have tenacity if I want to succeed. I got this advice from my high school Korean teacher, when I was suffering from bad scores.
I entered boarding high school luckily but I thought it was all through my work and was arrogant. However, as soon as I started studying and got test scores I realized the truth. My grades were crawling the bottom so starting that day I started studying. Unfortunately, my grades didn\'t get that better. Instead of working even more harder I justified the situation by thinking that all the other students are genius. I thought I just don\'t fit in this place.
When I was stuck in my own thought and was going downhill, my Korean teacher told me that tenacity is the central key to success. Since that teacher was who I followed and respected a lot it was first time in my high school I became humble and revised my mindset. I still think about that scene when something seems unreachable with my capacity.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! It must have been tough feeling like you were at the bottom of the class, but the fact that you were able to acknowledge that and change your mindset is a huge strength.
-T. Sonny
As I remember, the best advice that I received is to have tenacity if I want to succeed.
>>As I remember, the best advice I received was to have tenacity if I wanted to succeed.
I got this advice from my high school Korean teacher, when I was suffering from bad scores.
>>I got this advice from my high school Korean teacher when I was struggling with bad scores.
I entered boarding high school luckily but I thought it was all through my work and was arrogant.
I entered boarding high school luckily but I thought it was all through my work and was arrogant.
>>I entered a boarding high school, which I was lucky to do, but I thought it was all due to my hard work and became arrogant.
However, as soon as I started studying and got test scores I realized the truth.
>>However, as soon as I started studying and received my test scores, I realized the truth.
My grades were crawling the bottom so starting that day I started studying.
>>My grades were at the bottom, so from that day on, I started studying.
Unfortunately, my grades didn\'t get that better.
>>Unfortunately, my grades didn’t improve much.
Instead of working even more harder I justified the situation by thinking that all the other students are genius.
>>Instead of working even harder, I justified the situation by thinking that all the other students were geniuses.
I thought I just don\'t fit in this place.
>>I thought I just didn’t fit in at this place.
When I was stuck in my own thought and was going downhill, my Korean teacher told me that tenacity is the central key to success.
When I was stuck in my own thought and was going downhill, my Korean teacher told me that tenacity is the central key to success.
>>When I was stuck in my own thoughts and things were going downhill, my Korean teacher told me that tenacity is the key to success.
Since that teacher was who I followed and respected a lot it was first time in my high school I became humble and revised my mindset.
>>Since that teacher was someone I respected and looked up to, it was the first time in high school that I became humble and revised my mindset.
I still think about that scene when something seems unreachable with my capacity.
>>I still think about that moment whenever something seems unreachable for my abilities.
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