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학생이 쓴 원문
There are several factors that I consider when I choose a movie. For genre, I avoid watching horror movie. If I watch a horror movie it tortures me every night because on my bed in darkness, my brain connects horrible things in the movie and reality. Therefore horror movies are excluded on the first place. For actors, I like to choose a movie that my favorite actors starred because the only fact that they are in the movie makes movie interesting and attractive even though it isn\'t by itself.
Apart from these I\'m not tricky about choosing movies. I usually choose movies that are popular such as Marvel series or Disney series. Especially for series, their is some kind of invisible pressure that I put on myself to watch all of them once I start, that I choose the movie without concern if it\'s one of the series.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I completely understand your approach to movie selection! It’s interesting how certain genres just don’t sit well with us and become automatic exclusions, like you do with horror.
-T. Sonny
There are several factors that I consider when I choose a movie.
>>There are several factors I consider when choosing a movie.
For genre, I avoid watching horror movie.
>>For the genre, I avoid watching horror movies.
If I watch a horror movie it tortures me every night because on my bed in darkness, my brain connects horrible things in the movie and reality.
>>If I watch a horror movie, it tortures me every night because, in the darkness of my bed, my brain connects the horrible things in the movie with reality.
Therefore horror movies are excluded on the first place.
>>Therefore, horror movies are excluded right from the start.
For actors, I like to choose a movie that my favorite actors starred because the only fact that they are in the movie makes movie interesting and attractive even though it isn\'t by itself.
>>When it comes to actors, I like to choose movies starring my favorite actors because the mere fact that they’re in the movie makes it interesting and attractive, even if the movie itself isn\'t that great.
Apart from these I\'m not tricky about choosing movies.
Apart from these I\'m not tricky about choosing movies.
>>Apart from these factors, I’m not very picky when choosing movies.
I usually choose movies that are popular such as Marvel series or Disney series.
>>I usually go for popular ones, like the Marvel or Disney series.
Especially for series, their is some kind of invisible pressure that I put on myself to watch all of them once I start, that I choose the movie without concern if it\'s one of the series.
>>Especially with series, there’s a kind of invisible pressure I put on myself to watch all of them once I start, so I choose movies without much concern if it’s part of a series.
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