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2025-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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Amount of time I use for preparing depends on what I\'m getting ready for. If I\'m going out for minor chores such as going to a grocery store or hospital, it only takes about 10 minutes to get ready. Putting on sunscreen and wearing outerwear is the only things that I do. I literally don\'t decorate myself at all. However, when I have to prepare for an appointment, it takes longer time. There are more things to consider and care. I have to concern about which clothes and shoes to wear, matching the vibe of the event, and I also need to spend more time on wearing my make up and contact lens. Therefore, it takes maximum 1 hour. It\'s quite a long time, but I\'m pretty sure that it will be shorter than the average of Korean women.

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Hello, Ms. [Name]! I like how real and down-to-earth you sound here. It’s super relatable. Sometimes you just want to get out the door fast, no fuss, and you keep it simple. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
If I\'m going out for minor chores such as going to a grocery store or hospital, it only takes about 10 minutes to get ready.
>>Correct!
Putting on sunscreen and wearing outerwear is the only things that I do. 
>>All I do is put on sunscreen and some outerwear.
I literally don\'t decorate myself at all.
>>I really don’t bother with any kind of grooming or decoration.
However, when I have to prepare for an appointment, it takes longer time. 
>>However, when I have to prepare for an appointment, it takes more time.
There are more things to consider and care. 
>>There are more things to think about and take care of.
I have to concern about which clothes and shoes to wear, matching the vibe of the event, and I also need to spend more time on wearing my make up and contact lens. 
>>I have to consider which clothes and shoes to wear to match the vibe of the event, and I also need to spend extra time on makeup and putting in my contact lenses.
Therefore, it takes maximum 1 hour. 
>>Because of that, it can take up to an hour.
It\'s quite a long time, but I\'m pretty sure that it will be shorter than the average of Korean women.
>>It feels like a long time, but I’m pretty sure it’s still shorter than the average preparation time for most Korean women.

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