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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
-T. Sonny
I think I\'m half introvert and half extrovert person.
>>I think I’m half introvert and half extrovert.
When I\'m in a situation that I have to socialize, I can change myself to be seemed like an extrovert person.
>>When I’m in a situation where I need to socialize, I can adjust myself to seem like an extrovert.
However, since I\'m also half introvert there is energy limitation for me to act as an extrovert.
>>However, since I’m also part introvert, I have limited energy for acting that way.
When socializing with people, making people to enjoy the conversation is important.
>>When socializing, I think it’s important to make others enjoy the conversation.
I think I\'m learning and practicing how to make enjoyable conversation these days.
>>These days, I’ve been learning and practicing how to have more enjoyable conversations.
Until college I rarely met new people and even new people were in similar age with me.
>>Until college, I rarely met new people, and even when I did, they were usually around the same age as me.
However, as I enter the college, the range of people that I meet increased and I also realized that socializing skills, especially toward new people, are essentially required to work and engage in the group.
>>But after entering college, the range of people I meet has widened, and I’ve realized that social skills, especially with new people, are essential for working and participating in group settings.
To sum up, I\'m in a process of training myself to become a good conversation partner, and I believe I have enhanced since I resolved to improve myself.
>>To sum up, I’m in the process of training myself to become a good conversation partner, and I believe I’ve improved since I decided to work on it.
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