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today i plan to go to kids cafe with my daughter\'s friends.
I sercheda that place on the internet.
I got the information that is a new one which recently was open.
at first we discussed three options.
we choosed it .
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Hi Ms. [Name]! Enjoy your day at the cafe!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
today i plan to go to kids cafe with my daughter\'s friends.
REVISED: Today, I plan to go to a kids\' café with my daughter\'s friends.
I sercheda that place on the internet.
I got the information that is a new one which recently was open.
REVISED: I searched for the place on the internet and found out that it\'s a new one that recently opened.
at first we discussed three options.we choosed it .
REVISED: At first, we discussed three options, and we chose this one.
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