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학생이 쓴 원문
today i had tea time with my friends.
one of my friend sent me a wedding paper
she planed to marry this month
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]! How was your tea time? Congratulations to your friend who\'s getting married soon!
one of my friend sent me a wedding paper
she planed to marry this month
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
today i had tea time with my friends.
REVISED: I had tea time with my friends.
one of my friend sent me a wedding paper
REVISED: One of my friends gave me a wedding invitation.
REVISED: One of them sent me a wedding invitation.
she planed to marry this month
REVISED: She’s planning to get married this month!
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