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And then I attempted to get as many experiences as possible because i thought various experiences and challenges would be neccessary to become a business person. Also at HANMI semiconductor, I have had the opportunity to work in trade department for 5 month as an internship. Over the 5 months, I had been a good business man at there. In this position I am in charge of importing business and communicated with overseas beneficiary by e-mail and speaking with phone. Sometime I did cus[이름] clearance for import. I think my biggest strengths are positive energy and flexibility. When I face difficult problem, I always try to positively think for problem solving. I believe it is important character to negotiate about foreign matters.

Hi [이름].Wow you're letter is quite impressive.I think the interviewer will be impress and you will have a big potential in their company..hope I could help you..   LINA   And then I attempted to get as many experiences as possible because i thought various experiences and challenges would be neccessary to become a business person. >>necessary,Good sentence. >>to become a better business man. Also at HANMI semiconductor, I have had the opportunity to work in trade department for 5 month as an internship. >> Also at HANMI semiconductor, I have had the opportunity to work in trade department for 5 months as an intern/for an internship.  Over the 5 months, I had been a good business man at there. >>For over 5 months, I had been a good business man there. In this position I am in charge of importing business and communicated with overseas beneficiary by e-mail and speaking with phone. >> In this position I am in charge of business importation and communicating with overseas beneficiary by e-mail and speaking by phone.  Sometime I did cus[이름] clearance for import. >> Sometimes I did cus[이름] clearances for importation I think my biggest strengths are positive energy and flexibility. >> I think my biggest strengths are being positive energy and flexibility When I face difficult problem, I always try to positively think for problem solving. I believe it is important character to negotiate about foreign matters. >> When I'm facing difficult situation, I always try to think positively to solve the problem. I believe it is important trait  in negotiating foreign matters.