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학생이 쓴 원문
As i told you via phone,i'm a lttle bit depressed. but i'am okay! k
Sorry for Lina while studying us,i think i just want to take a break
now..See you [이름]orrw with energetic voice..^^
p.s i'm so surprised regarding your working time..
do not crowd!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름].
Yes,I understand that you were very busy today and a bit depressed too.Don't worry I understand your situation. I'm still glad that everytime we talked you were able to manage to laugh with my pitches kkk..I hope that you will have some good break on your work,that would be really great.You're always energetic for me. SMILE!
LINA
As i told you via phone,i'm a lttle bit depressed. but i'am okay!
>>Correct^^
Sorry for Lina while studying us,
>>Sorry Lina because while we are studying.
i think i just want to take a break
>>Correct^^now..See you [이름]orrw with energetic voice..^^
>>Now,I'll see you [이름]orrow with energetic voice.p.s i'm so surprised regarding your working time..
>>Correct^^do not crowd!
>>Correct^^
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