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Q : what are you the purpose working in the philippines and other country ?
A : Someone asked me like that.. so i told that my purpose working
in the other country is to be international trade speaciallist that's
why i have to learn an english comunication skill for better expression.
i really hope to work in the other country before getting my job.
and i'm sure my character would be a valuable asset anywhere cause
i'm super lovely [이름]! righ Lina??^^ kkkkk
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름].The very lovely [이름] .I think it's in your system that you want to work with foreign people which is very good you will be able to learn their culture.And I gueess your personality will adapt easily to the new environment.
Ever beautiful LINA..
Q: what are you the purpose working in the philippines and other country ?
>>What are your purpose in working in the Philippines and to other country?A : Someone asked me like that..
>>Correct
so i told that my purpose working in the other country is to be international trade speaciallist that'swhy i have to learn an english comunication skill for better expression.
>>So I told him that my purpose in working in the other country is to be an international trade specialist that;s why i have to learn how to communicate in English and to have better expressions. i really hope to work in the other country before getting my job.
>>I really hope to work in other country before getting a new joband i'm sure my character would be a valuable asset anywhere cause i'm super lovely [이름]! righ Lina??^^ kkkkk
>>Correct
>>The grammar of the sentence is correct but the emaning of it "Let me think about it"
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