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2010-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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Q : what are you the purpose working in the philippines and other country ? A : Someone asked me like that.. so i told that my purpose working in the other country is to be international trade speaciallist that's why i have to learn an english comunication skill for better expression. i really hope to work in the other country before getting my job. and i'm sure my character would be a valuable asset anywhere cause i'm super lovely [이름]! righ Lina??^^ kkkkk

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Hello [이름].The very lovely [이름] .I think it's in your system that you want to work with foreign people which is very good you will be able to learn their culture.And I gueess your personality will adapt easily to the new environment.   Ever beautiful LINA..      Q: what are you the purpose working in the philippines and other country ? >>What are your purpose in working in the Philippines and to other country?A : Someone asked me like that.. >>Correct so i told that my purpose working in the other country is to be international trade speaciallist that'swhy i have to learn an english comunication skill for better expression. >>So I told him that my purpose in working in the other country is to be an international trade specialist that;s why i have to learn how to communicate in English and to have better expressions. i really hope to work in the other country before getting my job. >>I really hope to work in other country before getting a new joband i'm sure my character would be a valuable asset anywhere cause i'm super lovely [이름]! righ Lina??^^ kkkkk >>Correct >>The grammar of the sentence is correct but the emaning of it "Let me think about it"

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