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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~Lina
I'm happy to tell you again^^
but my battery disturbed our talking.
I'll charge the battery^^
I want to en[이름] the class with us.
Let's start again^^
강사 첨삭
Yes [이름] let's strat with our class again.I really miss you,your stories,your voice everything about you.You have a good diction now.I'm very happy about that but since it's been a long time since the last class that we have.We need to rush up some things to improved or to refresh you to our lesson.Have a great evening.
LINA
Hi~Lina
>>CorrectI'm happy to tell you again^^
>>I'm happy to talk to you againbut my battery disturbed our talking.
>>But my battery disturbed our talk.I'll charge the battery^^
>>CorrectI want to en[이름] the class with us.
>>I want to en[이름] our class.Let's start again^^
>>Correct
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