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2010-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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Describe your personality in social life. I belive My character in social life and business situation keeps calm because when i maintain my composure, i can easily focus on my dutie and dont make mistake butthat is not the best way to live happy life and i'm not cold guy.i mean we need to try being professional person in business at least.

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Hello [이름].Wow,I'm really like you're attitude you could easy to adapt on a topic.You know how to balance your emotions and your being humurous.kkk..You're a cold guy for me oopppsss I mean cool guy!kk..     LINA   Describe your personality in social life. >>Correct >>USe"on"instead of inI belive My character in social life and business situation keeps calm >>I believe,My character in social life and business situation is calmbecause when i maintain my composure, i can easily focus on my dutie and dont make mistake >>Because when I maintain composure,I can easily focus on my duties and don't make mistake butthat is not the best way to live happy life and i'm not cold guy. >>but this is not the best way to live a happy life and I'm not a cold guy. i mean we need to try being professional person in business at least. >>I mean we need to became a professional in the business at least.

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