^^

Hello there Ji [이름],

                That\'s great achievement. Congratulations. I wish to hear more of it to you in the class. See you later!

~Teacher Verna~

After high sc[이름]l, I was interested Arab.

>> After high sc[이름]l, I was interested in Arab.

I had to study very hard for got a scholarship, for gain a qualification which is to be exchange student in Syria.

>>I had to study hard to get a scholarship, and to be qualified to be an exchange student Syria.

Thanks to my effort, I could met a various foreign friends, learn about different way of life style and thinking. 

>> Thanks to my effort, I could meet various foreign friends, learn about different ways of life style and think. 

Since Univ days, I joined Starbucks as a baristar.

>>Since my University days, I joined Starsbucks as a barista. 

One day ee had new promotion like a half-price sale. 

>>Correct

So many customers came to our store to enjoy it, for that reason all members were very busy.

>>Correct

We needed extra hands, but our staffs were limited.

>>Correct

I think we had to need extra times. 

>>I think we needed extra time.

So I was voluntarily work overtime and asked it team-members.

>>So, I voluntarily worked over time and asked our team to do the dsame.

Finally, that promotion is finished successfully in harmony our team-work.

>>Correct

After this, area manager was report to my passion, effort to head-office.

>>After this the area manager reported my effort to the head office.

And I could promote to supervisor who promoted in the shortest time that area. 

>I was promoted as a supervisor in that area in at the shortest time in that area.

Hi, Verna^

>>Correct

^ This is a part of answer to interview like a introduce myself.

>>This part of an interview is like self introduction.

Check plz ;D

>>Please check it.