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operating expenses with business plans.Thanks to these efforts, started well. At that time, we have trouble about appointment to meeting for study, study style, rule, cleaning room and so on because all members are busy, some different plane.I think the most important thing is being cooperation, harmony. So I planned some game and date to diner. During vacation, went to trip and hiking, with study. It was best way. We could feel close to each other.Until now, We have good memories and keep in touch. 6.In fact, Korea is the only divided country in the world. It’s so sad and bad. Because it, we’re get some unexpected troubles.And I hope that. Two Koreas are become one with peace at no violence, war like the old days.7.My foreign friend is said to me, young Koreans seem so stress, hard here. Our life in Korea makes him to be stress. I agree with him. Some time ago, we were become hard. . Our life is so highly competitive. And winners take it all.

Thank you for doing your homework today! I really appreciate your time and effort in doing this. I have written the necessary corrections below. Please read and analyze them carefully. Then, try to apply them in appropriate situations. Take care and have a wonderful day ahead! ~Teacher Verna operating expenses with business plans. >>Title: Operating Expenses with Business Plans Thanks to these efforts, started well. >>Thanks to these efforts, it started well. At that time, we have trouble about appointment to meeting for study, study style, rule, cleaning room and so on because all members are busy, some different plane. >>At that time, we had some troubles about the appointment and meeting that aims to discuss the study, study style, rules, cleaning the room and many others because all members were busy and on a different plane. I think the most important thing is being cooperation, harmony. >>I think the most important thing is being cooperative and harmonious with one another. OR >>I think the most important thing is cooperation and harmony in the team. So I planned some game and date to diner. >>That\'s why I planned some game and date for the dinner. During vacation, went to trip and hiking, with study. >>During the vacation, we went on a trip, had some hiking, and studied. It was best way. >>It was the best way to spend the vacation. We could feel close to each other. >>We felt close to each other. Until now, We have good memories and keep in touch. >>Until now, we still keep the good memories and constantly keep in touch with each other. 6.In fact, Korea is the only divided country in the world. >>CORRECT! It’s so sad and bad. >>CORRECT! Because it, we’re get some unexpected troubles. >>That\'s because we got some unexpected troubles. And I hope that. Two Koreas are become one with peace at no violence, war like the old days. >>I also hope that the 2 Koreas will reunite with peace and no violence or war just like the old days. 7.My foreign friend is said to me, young Koreans seem so stress, hard here. >>My foreign friend told me that young Koreans seem so stressed and experience difficulty here. Our life in Korea makes him to be stress. >>Our life in Korea makes him stressed. I agree with him. >>CORRECT! Some time ago, we were become hard. >>Some time ago, we experienced some difficulty. Our life is so highly competitive. And winners take it all. >>Our lifestyle has become highly competitive and the winner takes all.