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2010-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hi ~ how are you i concerend about this class seriously. i was so nervous because i didn't know about toeic speaking and how to do it. So, i think, it would be very helpful that you give me a example of answer (...sort of) 'before' or 'after' taking class. Actually, I can't say that i have done my best but tried. But i alway think since first time that i took this class, i need more skills to construct sentence or to be familiar with english. therefore if you give me an example of answers, i would memorize and memorize again. Than sometime would i speak phrase fluently (i hope). what do you think about my suggestion? or please give me some advice (if you have) bye, talk later~ p.s. my email : [이메일]

강사 첨삭

Hi Greg!
Good morning!!! Don't get nervous or frustrated with our TOEIC lesson. I know it's a lot different from our previous course. My advice is just try to talk freely, specially when you are trying to describe a picture. Just tell what you can see and as I have said try to use your imagination. Regarding the sample answers, I will provide you a sample answer from our previous lesson but not for the future lessons okay. We will discuss about this later during our class. See you later Greg!!
Lei :-)

Hi ~
how are you
>>correct
i concerned about this class seriously. 
>>I am concerned about this class seriously. 
i was so nervous because i didn't know about toeic speaking and how to do it. 
>>correct
So, i think, it would be very helpful that you give me a example of answer (...sort of) 'before' or 'after' taking class. 
>>
So, i think, it would be very helpful that you give me a sample answer (...sort of) 'before' or 'after' taking class. 
Actually, I can't say that i have done my best but I tried. 
>>correct
But i alway think since first time that i took this class, i need more skills to construct my sentences or be more familiar with english. 
>>But I always think that since it's my first time to have this class, i need more skills to construct my sentences or be more familiar with english. 
therefore if you give me an example of answers, i would memorize and memorize again. 
>>therefore if you give me a sample answer, the tendency is I will just memorize the answer
Then I think sometime I would speak phrase fluently (i hope). 
>>correct
what do you think about my suggestion? 
>>correct
or please give me some advice (if you have)
>>correct
bye, talk later~
>>bye, I'll talk to you later

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