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2010-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

학생이 쓴 원문

84page LetterD Can not - You can not go to see a movie until finish your academe homework!! Must not - You must not play piano. Because it is 9 o'clock PM. Shall not - If tomorrow is rain, We shall not go to picnic. Wow! I finish my home work!

강사 첨삭

Subin, Welcome to our Diary page!!! Anyway, I appreciate your obedience and for really making your homework. I just hope that it would become longer nad longer as time goes by. Like what I have asked you awhile ago, I hope that the ext homework will really be a diary. A writing composition, ok?have a great night and call you again tomorrow. --jade-- Can not - You can not go to see a movie until finish your academe homework!!>>You cannot go see a movie not until you finished all your academy homework’s. Must not - You must not play piano. Because it is 9 o'clock PM.>>You must not play the piano because it si already 9 o’clock at night. Shall not - If tomorrow is rain, We shall not go to picnic.>>We cannot go for a picnic if it rains tomorrow. Wow! I finish my home work! >>Wow! I finished my homework!

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