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employee
My cousin is employee in pupular restaurant.
Employees is can't on drink on duty. because, they cannot work probably.
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Subin,
Your corrections^^ do try to make longer compositions next time. ^^
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employeeMy cousin is employee in pupular restaurant.>>My cousin is an employee at a popular restaurant. Employees is can't on drink on duty. because, they cannot work probably.
>>Employees can’t be drunk while on duty because they won’t be able to work properly.
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