2013-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Nowadays i got into sherlock homes made by bbc. I started to watch it to listen to british accent at first but at some point, i fell in love with it. The main reason i like is a main actor is so gorgeous that he make me imitate his behavior he shows on it. He is very blunt and has no friend. Theres no point he attracts someone so i dont get why i like him. I guess he looks very cold seemingly but he may have a warm hearted so that makes me into him unconsiously. There are all 6episodes but i am so sad i already watched all today. So i have to wait for next episode no one knows when it comes out. Anyway, i forget my purpose to learn english from it due to its attraction. I think myself attraction will give a n interest and ill keep learning english . I know it is a rationalization. Whether it is or not. Iam so pleased to watch it . I really recommend you to watch it as well. Mavbe we can share manythings and have st in common

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Hello [이름], Thank you for your recommendation. I think I have watched that show before but I was not able to continue it because I had no time. I will try to watch it again for you. Keep on watching English shows. You will learn a lot from it. See you! T. Sheela Nowadays i got into sherlock homes made by bbc. >> Nowadays, I am into Sherlock homes by BBC. I started to watch it to listen to british accent at first but at some point, i fell in love with it. >> I started to watch it because I wanted to listen to British accent shows but at some point, I started to love it. The main reason i like is a main actor is so gorgeous that he make me imitate his behavior he shows on it. >> The main reason I like show is because of the main actor, he is so gorgeous that makes me imitate his behavior in the show. He is very blunt and has no friend. >>Correct! Theres no point he attracts someone so i dont get why i like him. >>Theres no reason to be attracted to him, so, I don\'t know why I like him. I guess he looks very cold seemingly but he may have a warm hearted so that makes me into him unconsiously. >>I guess he looks seemingly cold but he is a warm hearted person and  that makes me into him unconsiously. >>OR: I guess he looks seemingly cold but he is a warm hearted person and  that makes me like him unconsciously. There are all 6episodes but i am so sad i already watched all today. >> There are 6 episodes and I am so sad that I already watched all of them today. So i have to wait for next episode no one knows when it comes out. >> So, I have to wait for the next episode. No one knows when will it come out. Anyway, i forget my purpose to learn english from it due to its attractiveness. >> Anyway, I forgot my purpose in learning English due to it\'s I think myself attraction will give a n interest and ill keep learning english . >>I think being attarcted to this show will make me more interested in learning English. >> I think being attracted to this show will motivate me even more to study English. I know it is a rationalization. >> I know it is rational. Whether it is or not. >> Correct! I am so pleased to watch it . >>Correct! I really recommend you to watch it as well. >> Correct! Mavbe we can share manythings and have st in common >> Maybe,we can share manythings and will have common interets on it.

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