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2013-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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I dont know why i am so tired constantly. I slept at my academy and felt down. To make matters worse , i am totally got into my unclear future. It is litimted to do manything i go for but i still have a tons of stuff i want ro acheive and have a long way to go . By the way tomorrow the result of my application for mentoring comes out. I am littele bit nervous cause i was really dying to do that. I can get benefits cause big company in korea held this event so they give many advantages for employees . Andby doing this. I can experience unexpected accident inmy life hang ing out with people. As though i get through a first stage, an interview is waiting for me. Whether i got through it or not, i am going to do my best. Above of all i can help students who cant study without any support to learn manythings from a mento

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Hi [이름]! Wow! I am so much excited to know the result of your application. I really wish that you passed. You have to take one at time in achieving your goal. You have a long way to go so don\'t be rattled if you think you are lacking time. Remember, everything has their own time. So, if you have a certain goal you want to achive in one day, then focus to on it before moving to the next plan. See you! T. Sheela I dont know why i am so tired constantly. >>I don\'t know why I have been constantly tired. I slept at my academy and felt down. >>Correct! To make matters worse , i am totally got into my unclear future. >>To make it worse, I am not totally sure about my futue, It is litimted to do manything i go for but i still have a tons of stuff i want ro acheive and have a long way to go . >>I have unlimited things to do and I still have tons of stuff I wanted to achieve. I have a long way to go. By the way tomorrow the result of my application for mentoring comes out. >>By the way, the result of my application in mentoring will come out tomorrow. I am littele bit nervous cause i was really dying to do that. >> I am a little bit nervous because I have been dying to know the result. I can get benefits cause big company in korea held this event so they give many advantages for employees . >> I can get benefits because a big company in Korea sponsored this event so, they  can give a lot of advantages for the employees. Andby doing this. I can experience unexpected accident inmy life hang ing out with people. >>And by doing this, I can experience unexpected incidents in my life by hanging out with other people. As though i get through a first stage, an interview is waiting for me. >>If I get through the first stage, an interview will be waiting for me. Whether i got through it or not, i am going to do my best. >>Correct! Above of all i can help students who cant study without any support to learn manythings from a mento >>Above all, I can help students who can\'t study because there are no mentors to teach them many things.

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