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2013-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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HOMEWORK:HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: LINKING WORDS Make one sentence from the two below, using the word(s) in brackets. Example : It was raining. We played golf. (even though) => Even though it was raining, we played golf. 1. She wasn't very rich. She gave money to the beggar. (although) Although she wasn't very rich, she gave money to the beggar. 2. He left early. He wanted to arrive on time. (so that) So that he left early, he wanted to arrive on time. 3. You can go out tonight. You must tell us where you are going. (provided) Provided you can go out tonight, you must tell us where you are going. 4. I don't earn a big salary. But if I did, I wouldn't buy a car. (even if) Even if I don't earn a big salary, but if I did, I wouldn't buy a car 5. Take a sandwich. There might be no restaurant. (in case) In case take a sandwich,there might be no restaurant.

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Hello there! I\'m grateful to have a diligent student like you. I know you\'re exerting great effort in improving your English skills. Just don\'t give up, okay? I wrote down my corrections so you can analyze them. Take care always! :) T. Chloe HOMEWORK:HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: LINKING WORDS Make one sentence from the two below, using the word(s) in brackets.Example : It was raining. We played golf. (even though) => Even though it was raining, we played golf.1. She wasn\'t very rich. She gave money to the beggar. (although)Although she wasn\'t very rich, she gave money to the beggar.>>Correct!2. He left early. He wanted to arrive on time. (so that)So that he left early, he wanted to arrive on time.>>He left early so that he wouldl arrive on time.3. You can go out tonight. You must tell us where you are going. (provided)Provided you can go out tonight, you must tell us where you are going.>>You can go out tonight provided you tell us where you are going. 4. I don\'t earn a big salary. But if I did, I wouldn\'t buy a car. (even if)Even if I don\'t earn a big salary, but if I did, I wouldn\'t buy a car>>Even if I earned a big salary I wouldn\'t buy a car.5. Take a sandwich. There might be no restaurant. (in case)In case take a sandwich,there might be no restaurant. >>Take a sandwich in case there\'s no restaurant.

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