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2010-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Monica

학생이 쓴 원문

I've spent very relaxing days, so I'm a little afraid of waking up early and having a busy days. Although these are trivial problems,I'm worring about this. When we discussed about education,I said, I prefer making money rather than other job, nowdays. As I think about myself,my thinking is a little outdated. I need some change to do some special things which are different my ordinary life. I'm expecting new hospital and new employees. I'll do my best.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I'm happy that you are giving time for yourself to think of what you want in life .  It's so important to be happy.  Remember,  money can give you a everything but happiness and love.  It would be best to know what you really want so that you won't regret in the future.  Good luck for tomorrow.! Monica   I've spent very relaxing days, so I'm a little afraid of waking up early and having  busy days. >>>correct  Although these are trivial problems,I'm worring about this. >>>correct When we discussed about education,I said, I prefer making money rather than other job, nowdays. >>>When we discussed about education,I said, I prefer making money rather than other jobs nowadays.  As I think about myself,my thinking is a little outdated. >>>correct I need some change to do some special things which are different my ordinary life. >>>I need some changes to do special things which are different from my ordinary life. I'm expecting new hospital and new employees. I'll do my best. >>>I'm expecting a new environment and new acquaintances.  I'll do my best.

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