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i really want to travel overseas! especially to south america.
because many people travel around the europe and south asia.
but many people don't know about south america.
it's so hard to get information about a tip to south america in internet.
so i want to be a pioneer.
and now i'm learning spanish. it's so interesting to study.
i hope that i have opportunity to speak native travelling around south america.
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I really had fun reading this!
I agree that most of the tourists are going to Europe.
That\'s a great idea that you want to be unique. ^^
Keep up the good work specially in learning Spanish.
Keep interested, okay? ^^
i really want to travel overseas!
>> Correct! *I* (Capitalization)
especially to south america.
>> I specially like to visit South America.
because many people travel around the europe and south asia.
>> Because many people travel around Europe and South Asia.but many people don\'t know about south america.>> But many people don\'t know about South America.it\'s so hard to get information about a tip to south america in internet.
>> It\'s so hard to get information about a trip to South America in the internet.so i want to be a pioneer.
>> So, I want to be a pioneer.and now i\'m learning spanish.
>> And now, I\'m learning Spanish.
it\'s so interesting to study.
>> It\'s so interesting to study.i hope that i have opportunity to speak native travelling around south america.
>> I hope that I\'ll have the opportunity to speak like a native speaker while travelling around South America.
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